New Year, New Resolutions? Not Really
I would like for us to move to a different apartment this year.
I would like to see Black Pearls published.
I would like to finish The Palmer Affair, which is the sequel to Harlem Redux.
Okay, let's go over that again, and tweak it a bit.
I intend for us to move to a different apartment this year.
I intend to see Black Pearls published.
I intend to finish The Palmer Affair, which is the sequel to Harlem Redux.
Hmmm ... better. But not quite there yet. How about:
We will move to a better apartment this year.
I will see Black Pearls published.
I will finish The Palmer Affair, which is the sequel to Harlem Redux.
Much better!
I would like to see Black Pearls published.
I would like to finish The Palmer Affair, which is the sequel to Harlem Redux.
Okay, let's go over that again, and tweak it a bit.
I intend for us to move to a different apartment this year.
I intend to see Black Pearls published.
I intend to finish The Palmer Affair, which is the sequel to Harlem Redux.
Hmmm ... better. But not quite there yet. How about:
We will move to a better apartment this year.
I will see Black Pearls published.
I will finish The Palmer Affair, which is the sequel to Harlem Redux.
Much better!
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